英語(yǔ)大作文第三段寫作要素
第三段結(jié)尾部分是整篇文章的總結(jié)部分，對(duì)于全文來(lái)說(shuō)有點(diǎn)睛和提分的作用�？蚣芤卜譃樨�(fù)向文章行文思路與正向文章行文思路兩大類。上次和大家分享的是負(fù)向文章思路，本次卞老師給大家分析積極正面的文章行文思路。
我們先以2001年考研英語(yǔ)真題為例。在2001年“愛心是一盞燈，在越黑暗的地方越明亮”的寫作題目中，范文的結(jié)束段是這樣來(lái)進(jìn)行的：
It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
這是作文的第三段。在這個(gè)段落中，作者在此明確了自己的觀點(diǎn)：表示愛心的最好方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。同時(shí)作者又給出了自己的建議，希望每個(gè)人都隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備向有困難的人伸出援助之手。
上面的`例子是一個(gè)關(guān)于正面的話題，這是圍繞“愛心”展開的。因此，在這一段中，首先需要去弘揚(yáng)這種美德，或者現(xiàn)象。在第三段的第一句，重申論點(diǎn)是非常有必要的。例如這句話“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”，為了使我們的社會(huì)更加美好，這樣積極正面的例子是我們每一個(gè)人都要效仿并學(xué)習(xí)的。在第三段的第二句中，需要表明“當(dāng)前社會(huì)的確很需要這種正能量或者這種積極正面的行為”。正如第一個(gè)例子中的這句話“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”，范文中再次表明社會(huì)中的每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該隨時(shí)做好準(zhǔn)備去幫助其他人。無(wú)論是作為我們的家人，還是陌生人，我們都不應(yīng)該見他人有難而視而不見。在第三段的第三句中，文章應(yīng)該“對(duì)未來(lái)的憧憬或者期待”進(jìn)行表述。例如，“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”，針對(duì)這種正面行為或現(xiàn)象，如果一直保持著這種正能量，社會(huì)將會(huì)變得更美好，愛心的光將照亮悲傷的陰影。
下面卞老師給大家總結(jié)一下積極正向文章整體的寫作思路。
正向文章行文思路 (積極倡導(dǎo))：
( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to (foster people’s confidence).
社會(huì)層面
(1)媒體傳遞正能量media
The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.
(2)教育education
Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically, self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.
(3)學(xué)校college
College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.
curriculum 校內(nèi)課程
extra curriculum課外活動(dòng)
electives n選修課 elective curriculums
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