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初中英語(yǔ)作文《I love my school》評(píng)析
I love my school
My school is very big with several tall buildings.there are about 800 students in it .We have a big playground with a lot trees around it.In summer ,there are all kinds of flowers everywhere. We have a lot of fun at school. During the breaks,we play games and do sports,such as playing basketball, football and table tennis. All of us students can study hard, obey the school rules ,take care of the school environment. There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. The teachers in the school are kind to us just like our parents.In my heart, the school is like a big family. I like my school and feel proud of it.
1.文章書(shū)寫(xiě)形式不規(guī)范，希望注意。
2.“there are …”句首字母要大寫(xiě)。應(yīng)改為.“There are …”.
3.My school is very big with several tall buildings.“with”用得恰到好處。
4.There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. 運(yùn)用了不定式作后置定語(yǔ)，很好。
5.In my heart, the school is like a big family. 比喻恰當(dāng)。
文章語(yǔ)句連貫、流暢，句意完整，能利用較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)思想，基本功扎實(shí)、雄厚。不足之處在今后學(xué)習(xí)中要注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及字母大小寫(xiě)等細(xì)微問(wèn)題。
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