英語六級的批改作文

　　英語六級待批改作文：

　　Nowadays, more and more people are attracted by TV shows. It is a great shock in China and many youngsters want to attend this shows because they want become famous overnight.

　　The advantages of the TV shows are clear to many people. To begin with, some young people think that the TV shows is a good ideal. It can provide a chance to show their talents. Whats more , it can enriching audiences spiritual world. Last but not least, in terms of business, the shows can help the channels achieve huge incomes.

　　It can be justified without exaggeration that everything has two sides. TV shows is a good way to make success but not the only way. I advise young people should think twice before attend the shows. To say the least, if they decide to attend the TV show, they should keep balance with shows and learning.

　　英語六級作文批改如下：

　　Nowadays, more and more people are attracted by TV shows. It is a great shock in China and many youngsters want to attend this shows because they want become famous overnight.

　　The advantages of the TV shows are clear to many people. To begin with,some young people think that the TV shows is a good ideal（翻譯不通）. It can providea chance to show their talents. Whats more, it can enriching（改為enrich）audiences spiritual world. Last but not least, in terms of business, the shows can help the channels achieve huge incomes.

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