2016雅思寫作思路拓展示例

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　　Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success .Others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 有人認(rèn)為幸福來自經(jīng)濟(jì)成功，有人認(rèn)為幸福來之其他源泉，討論兩種觀點(diǎn)再給出你的意見?(2009年12月12日)

　　相關(guān)題目：

　　Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on health. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.幸福和經(jīng)濟(jì)成功關(guān)聯(lián)，幸福來自健康，討論再結(jié)論?(2012年10月11日)

　　思路拓展：

　　財(cái)富為何是幸福的源泉：

　　1. 財(cái)富可以使的人的生活自由，舒適以及幫助人去實(shí)現(xiàn)諸多的夢(mèng)想，例如：環(huán)游世界旅行，接受最好的教育，享受世間美食。

　　2. 財(cái)富是社會(huì)資源的象征，可以贏得別人的尊敬以及羨慕，可以帶來成就感。

　　幸福的其他源泉：

　　1. 健康是幸福生活的源泉，失去健康，擁有再多的財(cái)富，名聲和地位都是沒有任何意義的。生活中很多的例子，企業(yè)家富可敵國，但是，健康每況愈下，身體的負(fù)擔(dān)帶來心靈的壓力，他們很難幸福。

　　2. 有了健康的保障，人會(huì)更加容易事業(yè)成功家庭幸福，因?yàn)榻】悼梢允谷司�力充沛地�?yīng)對(duì)事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)以及樂觀地實(shí)現(xiàn)家庭的和諧。

　　3. 一個(gè)身心健康的人一定是一個(gè)樂觀自信的人，他開朗的性格會(huì)幫助他擴(kuò)大交友圈，好友的增加自然帶來生活的樂趣。

　　原創(chuàng)語料庫：

　　1. happiness = sense of happiness n 幸福

　　2. happiness = well-being = pleasure n快樂

　　3. happiness index n幸福指數(shù)

　　4. economic success = economic achievement n經(jīng)濟(jì)成就

　　5. have large sums of money = own a great deal of wealth v 擁有財(cái)富

　　6. have deep pockets = have money to burn v 財(cái)力雄厚

　　7. wholesome physique and mentality n健康的身心

　　8. is closely related to = is associated with 和……相關(guān)

　　9. have little correlation to …… v和……不相關(guān)聯(lián)

　　10. …… is a more essential factor in achieving happiness ……是獲得幸福更加重要的因素

　　11. strengthen one’s sense of fulfillment v增強(qiáng)人的成就感

　　12. earn respect and admiration from others v贏得別人的尊敬和羨慕

　　13. fulfill one’s many wonderful dreams v實(shí)現(xiàn)諸多的美麗夢(mèng)想

　　14. travel all around the globe v環(huán)球旅行

　　15. enjoy the delicious / delectable/ tasty foods in the world v享受世間美食

　　原創(chuàng)范文賞析：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) +作家立場

　　People have been pondering for years the connotation of true happiness. Perhaps no issue has led to such an end less debate as to whether or not large sums of money could directly bring people well-being. Standards towards happiness differ widely from person to person. My view is that the sense of well-being could derive from wealth, however, other more significant factors have more indispensable roles to play in enhancing one’s happiness index.

　　二段：論證財(cái)富為何是幸福的源泉

　　Indeed, happiness do closely relate to economic achievement to some extent because a great amount of wealth can make people’s life more enjoyable, comfortable and free. To be more specific, one can fulfill his many dreams such as receiving fine education and traveling around the globe if he or she has deep pocket. Still, economic success implies high social status, which can bring people the sense of happiness and even earn respect from others.

　　三段：論證幸福更加重要的源泉

　　Notwithstanding all that, there is no definite correlation between the amount of one’s wealth and his or her happiness index. Happiness，sometimes， does not depend on economic success but completely on wholesome physique and mentality. First, happiness lies in health. More precisely, wealth, fame, or status will be of little meaning if one fails to ensure his health. To illustrate, some affluent enterprisers have money to burn, yet, they are basically unhappy due to the deteriorating health condition and huge mental pressure. Further, health ensures career success and family harmony. In other words, health enables one to brave the career challenges energetically and harmonize the family life optimistically. Ultimately, those who enjoy good health must be confident and optimistic, their pleasant characters can help them enlarge circle of friends. The multiplication of close friends will brighten their spirit and sweeten their lives.

　　尾段：亮明觀點(diǎn)+總結(jié)理由

　　In the final analysis, I re-affirm my conviction that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to health, which is more significant. Only by means of owing desirable health condition can we enjoy the lifelong sense of pleasure although wealth sometimes indicates the source of happiness.

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