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2015年雅思寫作真題及范文（6月18日）
In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?
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In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.
The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.
Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.
In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.
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近年來,青少年犯罪的比例急劇增加,這引起了廣泛的討論。媒體暴力和不穩(wěn)定的家庭生活可能是兩個(gè)主要因素導(dǎo)致了青少年犯罪的傾向。他們兩人將在下面詳細(xì)討論,緊隨其后的是解決方案。
缺乏家庭生活應(yīng)該為青少年犯罪負(fù)責(zé)。大多數(shù)父母教育子女占用地毆打和虐待。即使是現(xiàn)在,可能父母仍然持有一種觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)為,一個(gè)好兒子是棒的產(chǎn)品。這種教育方法會(huì)讓孩子們關(guān)于暴力的誤導(dǎo)性的印象時(shí),他們很年輕,他們更有可能在未來成為真正的罪犯。為了解決這個(gè)問題,家長應(yīng)該調(diào)整教育在家里,更頻繁地與他們的孩子交流,并給予更多的關(guān)注和關(guān)愛尤其是情感需求。
過度暴露于媒體暴力也起著很大的作用在青少年犯罪的增加。我們都知道,暴力鏡頭在許多電影和電視游戲普遍存在,影響年輕人最。青少年缺乏自律傾向于模仿他們幻想英雄的犯罪行為在現(xiàn)實(shí)情況看動(dòng)作電影。實(shí)際上,這些青少年誤導(dǎo)了他們的英雄。在這種情況下,政府應(yīng)該設(shè)定一個(gè)評(píng)級(jí)和審查系統(tǒng),以控制的暴力、威脅和恐怖。
總之,家庭生活和媒體暴力是青少年犯罪的主要誘因。父母應(yīng)該改變他們的保健和教育子女的方法。與此同時(shí),政府應(yīng)該在屏幕上提供一個(gè)健康的環(huán)境。
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