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雅思寫作高分論述的方法
在日常生活或是工作學(xué)習(xí)中,許多人都有過(guò)寫作文的經(jīng)歷,對(duì)作文都不陌生吧,作文是人們把記憶中所存儲(chǔ)的有關(guān)知識(shí)、經(jīng)驗(yàn)和思想用書面形式表達(dá)出來(lái)的記敘方式。相信許多人會(huì)覺(jué)得作文很難寫吧,下面是小編精心整理的雅思寫作高分論述的方法,僅供參考,希望能夠幫助到大家。
雅思寫作高分論述的方法
雅思寫作考試建議考生積累觀點(diǎn)要走“正道”,即:
1. 擴(kuò)大閱讀面。閱讀中文相關(guān)內(nèi)容也可以有效地增加考生的背景知識(shí)。
2. 積累同類話題的通用觀點(diǎn)。
在文章總字?jǐn)?shù)要求不變的情況下,每個(gè)段落觀點(diǎn)數(shù)量越多,意味著支持句的數(shù)量就可以相應(yīng)地減少。如果一個(gè)段落中含有兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn),那么每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)句展開(kāi)一個(gè)支持句就滿足字?jǐn)?shù)要求了。
如:Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A類)
Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)
如果一個(gè)段落只有一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),在保持段落字?jǐn)?shù)不變的情況下,支持句的數(shù)量就要相應(yīng)地增加。
如:Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A類)
The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)
因此,在觀點(diǎn)較少的情況下,能否將觀點(diǎn)充分地展開(kāi)成為滿足字?jǐn)?shù)要求的關(guān)鍵所在。
其次,如何展開(kāi)一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),關(guān)鍵在于是否能夠靈活運(yùn)用論證方式。常用的論證方式包括:解釋(explanation),延伸(extension),舉例(exemplification)和對(duì)比(contrast)等,如:
A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句為解釋論證)(《劍6》Test 4)
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句為延伸論證) (《劍5》Test 2)
To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句為舉例論證)(《劍8》Test 3)
The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句為對(duì)比論證)(《劍5》Test 2)
以上就是通過(guò)幾個(gè)非常詳細(xì)的例子介紹的雅思寫作高分技巧中如何展開(kāi)觀點(diǎn),展開(kāi)論述方面的信息,非常實(shí)用。大家在備考自己的雅思寫作考試的時(shí)候,通過(guò)一段時(shí)間的練習(xí),就可以掌握這個(gè)技巧了。
雅思大作文如何舉例子?
在雅思考試中,大作文的寫作取得高分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一就是有理有據(jù),所謂有理有據(jù)就是道理講的清楚,例子用的合適。下面就讓我們跟隨張濤老師,一起探討一下舉證的方法和技巧。
一、擺事實(shí)
擺事實(shí)是指在行文當(dāng)中描述一些自己或者熟知的親友的經(jīng)歷。這樣做的主要目的是用一些細(xì)節(jié)向考官展示我們對(duì)語(yǔ)言的駕馭能力,同時(shí),通過(guò)真人真事引起考官的共鳴。例如:
First, ads disturb our life. Surely, we all have the experience that an of the information about a product often interrupts our pleasure of watching an exciting film on T.V, which makes us so annoyed that sometimes we have the impulse to call the T.V station to make a complaint.
What’s more annoying is that you have spent money on a newspaper, but you’ll find that most of the space in the newspaper is occupied by all kinds of disgusting ads about a medicine of dealing with sexual diseases, which has totally violated your previous desire of getting the news about what is happening.
二、列數(shù)字
實(shí)際上,大家看原汁原味的英文文章會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很多作者會(huì)列舉一些調(diào)查和研究成果來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn),因?yàn)檫@樣比較符合歐美國(guó)家人的習(xí)慣,在可信度上和擺事實(shí)具有異曲同工之妙。比如:
Ad is an effect way to develop economy. As is calculated by the Statistic Bureau of China, 80% of the products in China are promoted and marketed by ads, which has brought almost 20 billion incomes as the tax to the country.
Meanwhile, with the prosperity of ads industry, more job vacancies are created and more revenue is added to the GDP of China.
三、做引用
引用這個(gè)詞,我們并不陌生,因?yàn)槲覀冎袊?guó)學(xué)生最擅長(zhǎng)的就是引經(jīng)據(jù)典,但是事實(shí)上,雅思考試當(dāng)中,我們一般不引用名人名言,除非我們引用的是一個(gè)領(lǐng)域里面最頂尖的權(quán)威,是眾所周知的人,比如孔子、亞里士多德、柏拉圖等人的名言;或者經(jīng)過(guò)證實(shí)了的,為大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為是公理的名言,以及見(jiàn)諸于報(bào)紙和電視上的報(bào)道等,例如:
In recent time, more and more cases have been reported in newspaper and TV programs about the surprisingly increasing rate of children’s crimes. The situation has become so serious that it has aroused great concern of the whole community。
雅思寫作高分技巧
1、寫作文可以想到幾個(gè)點(diǎn),但是進(jìn)行擴(kuò)寫的時(shí)候就覺(jué)得很困難,怎么去擴(kuò)充自己的論據(jù)
作文觀點(diǎn)所需的支持論據(jù),可以從以下幾個(gè)渠道進(jìn)行獲取:考生自己的經(jīng)歷;身邊發(fā)生的事情;以及其他的媒體渠道所提供的信息。然而,對(duì)于這三類信息,我們建議考生能夠在一篇文章中適當(dāng)進(jìn)行組合,而不是僅僅使用某一類論據(jù)來(lái)進(jìn)行論證。對(duì)于第一類和第二類論據(jù),即考生自身的經(jīng)歷和身邊發(fā)生的事情,相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)比較容易組織;第三類信息的論據(jù),則需要考生在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累,不是一朝一夕可以完成的。換句話說(shuō),考生平時(shí)應(yīng)注意增加閱讀和擴(kuò)大知識(shí)面的機(jī)會(huì),比如多讀書看報(bào),當(dāng)然英文書報(bào)為首選,多了解時(shí)下發(fā)生的事件,這些信息無(wú)疑對(duì)于寫作的論據(jù)收集是很有幫助的。在比較專業(yè)的雅思考試培訓(xùn)課程當(dāng)中,寫作老師也會(huì)有針對(duì)性地去歸納和總結(jié)一些論據(jù)以供學(xué)生使用。
2、句型不能靈活運(yùn)用,總感覺(jué)句子寫的很生硬,怎么將句子寫得好
句型的靈活運(yùn)用,從評(píng)分角度來(lái)理解,即寫作評(píng)分的最后一個(gè)指標(biāo)GRA (Grammatical Range Accuracy). 這一評(píng)分內(nèi)容指得是是否能夠靈活地運(yùn)用不同的句型,深層次的意思理解為是否能夠綜合運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句和復(fù)雜句。在文章中,這些句子間或出現(xiàn),會(huì)使整篇文章讀起來(lái)有起伏感和節(jié)奏感。另外,要想寫出好的句子,必須先去接觸和學(xué)習(xí)好的句子。所以考生不應(yīng)該悶頭自己造句,而應(yīng)該多看native speaker寫的語(yǔ)言,來(lái)豐富自己的語(yǔ)言資料庫(kù),并加以針對(duì)性地學(xué)習(xí)和訓(xùn)練,以達(dá)到提高自己句子組織能力的效果。
心態(tài):
從雅思考試四部分來(lái)看,考生一般認(rèn)為閱讀和聽(tīng)力具備大量的解題技巧,只要將這些解題技巧掌握了,提高就會(huì)很快。而口語(yǔ)也有一系列的應(yīng)付方法和考場(chǎng)對(duì)策。但是,相對(duì)而言,寫作卻是英語(yǔ)(精品課)綜合能力的體現(xiàn),考生認(rèn)為短短幾個(gè)月的時(shí)間內(nèi)突飛猛進(jìn)基本不現(xiàn)實(shí),因此對(duì)寫作抱一種恐慌心態(tài)。于是得過(guò)且過(guò),認(rèn)為只要寫作將就就行,自己不如把時(shí)間多花在聽(tīng)力和閱讀上來(lái)幫自己拉分。持此種觀點(diǎn)的中國(guó)考生不在少數(shù),造成這樣一種情況:大多考生對(duì)寫作熱情不高,把大量時(shí)間和精力花在閱讀聽(tīng)力的練習(xí)上,從而到頭來(lái)寫作總的來(lái)說(shuō)都沒(méi)練過(guò)幾次,以至于找不到寫作文的一種節(jié)奏和感覺(jué)。到了考場(chǎng)上,必然會(huì)因?yàn)榘l(fā)揮不出真實(shí)的寫作水平導(dǎo)致分?jǐn)?shù)不理想。
高分經(jīng)驗(yàn):
1、有足夠的練習(xí)。這個(gè)練習(xí)指的是完整地寫夠量的作文,不管是大作文還是小作文。雅思的作文題目(TASK 1和TASK 2)可以總結(jié)成很多種類,在培訓(xùn)班上老師都會(huì)為我們總結(jié)出來(lái),因?yàn)椴恢罆?huì)考哪一類題目,所以每一類熱門題都要做足夠練習(xí)。
2、要找老師改。我雖然也有在備考期間進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí),但一來(lái)數(shù)量太少(大小作文各自不到10篇),二來(lái)我并沒(méi)有找寫作老師指導(dǎo)修改我的練習(xí)文章,連放到網(wǎng)上的論壇進(jìn)行烤鴨互改都沒(méi)有。自己?jiǎn)为?dú)練習(xí)的最大弊病就是,常犯的錯(cuò)誤自己不管怎么改,一定是找不全的,因?yàn)橐呀?jīng)形成習(xí)慣了。而別人就能夠看得出來(lái)你下意識(shí)犯下的錯(cuò)誤,即使對(duì)方只是一個(gè)能力跟你在一個(gè)水平的同學(xué),找他們修改對(duì)提高作文成績(jī)都是有好處的。
常用萬(wàn)能句型:
1、Nothing has received more praise and abuse than something
譯文:沒(méi)有什么能像這樣毀譽(yù)參半。
2、There is no doubt that
譯文:毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)
3、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子
譯文:之所以主要在于
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