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BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)考試中級(jí)經(jīng)典作文范文
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風(fēng)格：兩篇寫(xiě)作，1篇是正式，1篇是非正式。
1)短篇：memo, note, email
2)長(zhǎng)篇：fax, proposal , letter(訴信、道歉信、邀請(qǐng)信、詢(xún)價(jià)信、感謝信等), report (report on...、introduction、findings、conclusions、recommendations前面四個(gè)一個(gè)也不能少，至于最后的recommendations要看當(dāng)時(shí)的題目要求)
要求
•the purpose of the correspondence
•references to previous communication
•factual details
•the feelings and attitude of the writer
•the level of formality
•the opening sentence
•the closing sentence
•paragraphing
•the desired outcome
PART ONE
You work for a company which produces laser printers. You are visiting another company, Softcell, to buy some company software for your department. They have expressed an interest in your company's printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.
Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano, the Sales Manager.
Asking for his permission to take these items.
Explaining why you want them.
Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them.
總體：這是一篇小作文，要求寫(xiě)一個(gè)MEMO，字?jǐn)?shù)要求40-50字。本作文難度較大。
1. 審題：
本文審題會(huì)出現(xiàn)很大問(wèn)題，大約有70%的考生或多或少對(duì)題目產(chǎn)生誤解，30%的考生出現(xiàn)嚴(yán)重誤讀，導(dǎo)致分?jǐn)?shù)不及格。
請(qǐng)理清楚本文人物關(guān)系：你公司生產(chǎn)激光打印機(jī)(laser printers)，Softcell是另一家生產(chǎn)軟件的公司。You are visiting another company, Softcell, to buy some company software for your department. 本句中許多考生對(duì)are visiting理解錯(cuò)誤，認(rèn)為是已經(jīng)訪問(wèn)過(guò)或正在訪問(wèn)。事實(shí)上高中語(yǔ)法中就學(xué)過(guò)be doing在某些時(shí)候表將來(lái)，也就是說(shuō)你將要去Softcell公司買(mǎi)軟件。而Softcell公司表示對(duì)你公司生產(chǎn)的打印機(jī)有興趣，所以你要在買(mǎi)軟件的同時(shí)帶小冊(cè)子和打印機(jī)的樣品給Softcell公司。你現(xiàn)在要給你們公司的銷(xiāo)售經(jīng)理寫(xiě)信申請(qǐng)小冊(cè)子和樣品。許多考生容易產(chǎn)生誤解，認(rèn)為自己是給Softcell公司的經(jīng)理寫(xiě)信，把自己的產(chǎn)品吹噓了一通，或是申請(qǐng)從別人公司拿小冊(cè)子和打印機(jī)樣品。需要提醒考生的是BEC中級(jí)中考到的MEMO一般是公司內(nèi)部交流的信件，機(jī)會(huì)不會(huì)出現(xiàn)給公司外部的人寫(xiě)MEMO。
練口語(yǔ)得準(zhǔn)備好資料!!!
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：
字?jǐn)?shù)要求是40-50字，一般要求寫(xiě)三句話，每句話講明白一個(gè)信息即可，不需要展開(kāi)太多的細(xì)節(jié)。太多或太少都不好。寫(xiě)作中需要充分利用題干中的信息。許多考生句子寫(xiě)的很短，許多小短句連在一起，這樣的寫(xiě)作不符合英語(yǔ)的特點(diǎn)。例如：I would like to attend a seminar. It is about presentation skills. It will be held this Friday. 建議合句：I would like to attend a seminar on presentation skill this Friday. 也有些考生喜歡寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句，句子長(zhǎng)了之后不好駕馭，容易出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題，產(chǎn)生扣分。
3. 錯(cuò)誤：
語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤、詞匯使用錯(cuò)誤都會(huì)產(chǎn)生扣分。
例如：
I was asked to take twenty brochures and three sample printers out because of our products are interested by the Softcell Company.
本句中出現(xiàn)because of和interest的使用錯(cuò)誤。Because of 后面只能加名詞或動(dòng)名詞，不能加句子。Interest的用法：sb. is interested in sth./sth. is interesting to sb./sth. interest sb.
4. 范文：
Model writing
To: Mr. Jim Asano
From: Diana, Sales Dept.
Date: April 7th
Subject: Asking for brochures and sample printers
I will visit Sfttcell Co. to buy the computer software for our department next Tuesday April 15th. I want to gain your permission to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with me since they are quite interested in our products. If you can approve this, I would like to collect the items before next Monday.
Thank you
Diana
評(píng)析：本篇MEMO正確理解題目、覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言表達(dá)清晰流暢、無(wú)語(yǔ)法和詞匯使用錯(cuò)誤�？梢缘玫紹AND 5
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