托?荚嚨挠⒄Z(yǔ)作文模板
小編寄語(yǔ):對(duì)于那些剛?cè)腴T的考生來(lái)說(shuō),托福作文是最讓人頭疼的,在基礎(chǔ)入門階段最重要的就是全面理解托福寫作,抓住考試要求點(diǎn),按照主次步驟,循序漸進(jìn),一定會(huì)取得好成績(jī)的。以下就是小編整理英語(yǔ)作文常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題,建議同學(xué)們從以下五個(gè)關(guān)鍵步驟入手:
1.仔細(xì)審題,分析提示句,明確三方面問(wèn)題
切題是寫好文章最重要的前提。有的考生抱怨,自己感覺(jué)文章內(nèi)容豐富、語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)流暢,得分卻不高。其實(shí),文章跑題是分?jǐn)?shù)偏低的主要原因。因此,審好題、審清題在很大程度上關(guān)系到整篇文章的成敗,絕不可以掉以輕心。審題,不僅要仔細(xì)研究題目,還要結(jié)合給出的提示句加以分析。首先要明確文章要寫的內(nèi)容,即文章要圍繞什么主題來(lái)寫,這是保證整篇文章切題的關(guān)鍵;其次,確定文章所需的主語(yǔ)人稱,人稱混亂是中國(guó)學(xué)生常犯的一個(gè)毛病,而在審題階段確定人稱是避免文章人稱混亂的有效途徑;第三,注意文章對(duì)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)氣有無(wú)特殊要求。
2.圍繞提示句,構(gòu)建文章框架
草擬提綱時(shí),要緊緊圍繞提示句,尤其是提示句的關(guān)鍵詞,盡量多地?cái)U(kuò)展提示句所提供的信息,從而基本構(gòu)筑出文章的框架。在擴(kuò)展提示句時(shí),要注意,可以原封不動(dòng)地照抄提示句中的關(guān)鍵詞,但是絕對(duì)不要照搬提示句中的詞組和句子,一定要變換意思相同的表達(dá)進(jìn)行替換,這是顯示考生語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力的重要一環(huán)。為了避免段落內(nèi)容跑題,要從提示句中的關(guān)鍵詞出發(fā),圍繞關(guān)鍵詞開(kāi)拓思路,發(fā)揮聯(lián)想,記錄下所聯(lián)想到的東西:可以是句子,也可以是詞組;可以是英語(yǔ),也可以是漢語(yǔ)。然后對(duì)所記錄的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行篩選,選擇最有代表性的內(nèi)容草擬出文章的提綱。
3.依據(jù)所擬提綱,寫出全文主旨句及段落主題句
全文主旨句(thesis statement)涵蓋全文的核心內(nèi)容,而段落主題句(topic sentence)則是統(tǒng)領(lǐng)段落中心內(nèi)容的。段落主題句是為全文主旨句服務(wù)的。很多同學(xué)對(duì)全文主旨句缺乏了解,甚至無(wú)法區(qū)分全文主旨句和段落主題句。提出全文主旨時(shí),應(yīng)注意下面的問(wèn)題:
1)主旨通常是一個(gè)包含所寫的主旨要義,即中心思想的單一的陳述句;
2)主旨對(duì)文章的展開(kāi)加以限制;
3)主旨不能用短語(yǔ)、從句、或疑問(wèn)句;
4)主旨應(yīng)該明確具體,但主旨如果過(guò)于具體化就無(wú)法展開(kāi)文章的寫作;
5)同一個(gè)標(biāo)題可以有不同的主旨,所選主旨必須側(cè)重標(biāo)題的某一不同方面的內(nèi)容;
6)主旨必須揭示作者的觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。
優(yōu)秀范文:
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college, They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they've been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they've had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn't relate to their career.
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.
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