2017托福寫(xiě)作范文《培養(yǎng)孩子》

　　托�？荚嚨膫淇�，作文是不能忽略的重點(diǎn)。尤其是托福作文經(jīng)常會(huì)與一些社會(huì)上的熱點(diǎn)話題聯(lián)系在一起。因此考生在備考時(shí)，可多練習(xí)一些熱點(diǎn)話題的托福寫(xiě)作。下面為大家?guī)��?lái)一篇討論培養(yǎng)孩子的2017托福寫(xiě)作范文，供大家參考。

　　Agree or disagree: It is easier for parents to raise their children today than 50 years before.

　　Society keeps progressing, so does the literacy level. Then appears a controversy whether raising children becomes easier today than 50 years ago. As for me, I cast serious doubt on it and I think there are many external factors leading the education of young people to be intricate than before.

　　Firstly, too much reliance on the high technology is to the detriment of children’s growth. Specifically speaking, parents can hardly supervise and restrict their children’s behavior. Examples happening around us can be seen quite often. One sensational piece of News last year was reported about three girls who saw an advertisement posted on an encrypted website about the professions provided by ISIS that, as everyone knows, is a self-proclaimed nation but actually a terrorism organization and finally joined in the group successfully. The horror hit their parents and local government manifested that the supervision on Internet needs to be strengthened and there was no updated reports about it. Except for that, the phenomena about teenagers’ addiction to video games have swept all over the world. Even some college students cannot resist the lure from the virtual world and adolescent obesity can also be partly ascribed to their spending lots of time watching TV programs. Accordingly, technological advancement has already increased the difficulties of managing children.

　　Secondly, economic growth, overall speaking, improves average citizens’ well-being. However, the ensuing enormous pressure has made it necessary for every common family to fight for a living. In the last century, it could be commonly seen in China that parents made a living in the big cities and had to leave their children in their hometown that would be raised by their grandparents and the generation gap and the stereotyped concepts of last old generations were a huge obstacle to educate children. In the recent decade, the situation has become ameliorated, however, the pressure keeps rising and parens have to be fully devoted to their career. Thus, the time spent with their children could be extremely limited. For instance, a computer programmer is supposed to spend at least 9 hours dealing with his job and staying with his families appears to be impractical. Consequently, raising children becomes much more difficult than before partly because of huge pressure from the society.

　　Admittedly, the level of education at schools has experienced an increase. Thus, some people may argue that students will become more autonomous and self-disciplined. However, those people may fail to take into account the fact that current public education system lays much more emphasis on the development of students’ academic capabilities and downplays the importance of cultivating their personalities and characteristics. Besides, students are also under enormous pressure from both teachers and their peers and they should be taken good care of by their parents.

　　In a word, it is totally a different story when it refers to raising children compared with 5 decades ago.

　　附：托福寫(xiě)作技巧之“破題”技巧

　　很多同學(xué)在寫(xiě)托福、GRE的作文時(shí)遇到的第一個(gè)問(wèn)題是如何“破題”，面對(duì)作文題時(shí)，思路無(wú)法打開(kāi)，不知道從何處下手。而新四的課文則提供了高超的“破題”范本。以第五課《青年》(Youth)為例，作者在討論代溝問(wèn)題、為年輕人辯護(hù)時(shí)，開(kāi)篇就指明了問(wèn)題的根本所在：Let’s get down to fundamentals and agree that the young are after all human beings----people just like their elders。

　　作者接著指明兩者之間的唯一差別就是：年輕人前程似錦，而老年人一切輝煌都已成過(guò)眼云煙。這樣，下文的論證就有了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。我們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)，可以參考這種方法，在開(kāi)篇把問(wèn)題的根本所在講明白，這樣下文就有話可說(shuō)，而且容易讓人信服。新四中類(lèi)似的“破題”方法還有很多，再比如24課《美》(beauty)：作為一個(gè)極其抽象的概念，“美”究竟是什么本來(lái)就很難寫(xiě)清楚，而作者在第一段就給“美”下了巧妙的定義：美總會(huì)讓人想到超越我們俗世的另外一個(gè)世界。在這個(gè)框架中討論“美”，就可以有的放矢了。

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