簡單句除和之外其他五樣用的人并不多,高中英語句子完成提分的策略,引導(dǎo)的與現(xiàn)在過去將來事實想法的條件虛擬句常會和倒裝一起考查,定義不可做謂語的動詞叫非謂語動詞,由指代主句內(nèi)容引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。
高中英語作文提分句子
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外,詞匯的運用和句子的處理,也起著決定性作用。句子可長可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達。如果句子清一色是簡單句,文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的復(fù)雜句,讀起來也很費力。最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點也有些差別:
(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareofthe
approachinghunter.(并列分句(1)+2)
(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(現(xiàn)在分語短語+簡單句)
(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副詞短語+并列分句(1)-(2))
(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareofthe
approachinghunter.(簡單句+形容語短語)
(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎?
最后,看看這兩個句子要如何多樣化呢?
(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.
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(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.
Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.
(c)Theyoungpilot'sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.
(d)Extremeuneasineseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.
Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.
(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.
在上述12個句子中,(a)-(g)是簡單句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡單句除和(g)之外,其他五樣,用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句,尤其是(j)和這兩款;接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于,(g),(h),(j)和這五種,而其他的則棄如敝屣,不是很可惜嗎?
高中英語作文句子潤色,提高寫作分數(shù)
句子潤色,提高寫作分數(shù)
一、用從句:(定語從句,名詞性從句(主,表,賓,同),狀語從句)
1.Igotonabus.Therewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.(定語從句)Igotonabuswheretherewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.
2.Hegotthefirstplacein
theexam.Itsurprisedusalot.(非限制性定語從句)Hegotthefirstplaceintheexam,whichsurprisedusalot
3.Louisewasbornin1931.Heisafamousartistnow.(定語從句)
Louisewasbornin1931whoisafamousartistnow.
4.Herparentswouldn’tlethimmarrythegirl.Herfamilywaspoor.(定語從句)
Herparentswouldn’tlethimmarrythegirlwhosefamilywaspoor.
5.Itsurprisedmegreatly.Ifoundshewassuchafineswimmer.(用what引導(dǎo)的主語從句)
Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofindshewassuchafineswimmer.
6.HeofferedmeapieceofadvicethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.(what引導(dǎo)的主語從句)
WhatheofferedmewasthatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.
7.Theadvantagesareasfollows.Itisveryconvenientforuscommunicatewitheachother.Itisverycheapforustobuyit.(用表語從句合成一句)
Theadvantagesarethatitisveryconvenientforuscommunicatewitheachotherandverycheapfor
ustobuyit.
8.Thenewsisthatwewonthegame.Itmadeuswildwithjoy.(用同位語從句)Thenewsthatwewonthegamemadeuswildwithjoy.
9.Heworkedveryhard.Hemadegreatprogreinhisstudy.(狀語從句)Heworkedveryhardso
thatmadegreatprogreinhisstudy.
10.Heonlyenteredthecontestforfun,buthewonthefirstprize.(狀語從句)
Althoughheonlyenteredthecontestforfun,hewonthefirstprize.
二.用非謂語(todo,doing,done,with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))
1.WhenIheardthat,Iwasmuchmoved.
Hearingthat,Iwasmuchmoved.
2.Theywerefacedwithmanyproblems.Theydidn’tloseheart.
Facedwithmanyproblems,theydidn’tloseheart.
http://www.lady-power.com hispicture,amother
birdstaysinhernestinabigtree.Themotherbirdwatchedherbabiesflyingaway.
Inthispicture,amotherbirdstaysinhernestinabigtree,watchingherbabiesflyingaway.
4.Hewantstobeadmittedbytheidealuniversity.Hestudieshard.
Inordertobeadmittedbytheidealuniversityhestudieshard.
5.Thegirlisstaringatthepicture.Thegirlismyformerclassmate.
Thegirlstaringatthepictureismyformerclassmate.
6.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with復(fù)合結(jié)
構(gòu))
Hefellasleep,withthelightson.
7.Thesocietyisdevelopingrapidly.ItisquitenecessarythatweshouldhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly,itis
quitenecessarythatweshouldhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.
8.2,2200peoplewerekilledintheearthquake,andthousandsmorewereinjured.
22,200peoplewerekilledintheearthquake,withthousandsmoreinjured.
9.Alltheafternoonheworked.Thedoorwaslocked.
Alltheafternoonheworkedwiththedoorlocked.
10.Thegameiscomingsoon.Wearebusypracticing.
Withthegamecomingsoonwearebusy
practicing.
11.Ihadmuchworktodo.Icouldn’tgoouttoplayfootballwithhim.
Withmuchworktodo,Icouldn’tgoouttoplayfootballwithhim.
三用倒裝
1.Wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans.
Onlybythismeanscanwe
liveahappylife.
2.ThemomentIenteredtheroom,myphonerang.NosoonerhadIenteredtheroomthanmyphonerang.
3.Whenwestudyhard,werealizeourdream.
Onlywhenwestudyhardcanwerealizeourdreams.
4.Heisachild,buthe
knowsalot.
Childasheis,heknowsalot.
5.Heseldomstaysupuntilmidnight.
Seldomdoeshestayupuntilmidnight.
6.Henotonlyhadhelpedlotsofpeople,healsokeptitasecret.
Notonlyhadhehelped
lotsofpeoplebutalsokeptitasecret.
7.Ididn’tpickupmycourageuntilthen.
NotuntilthendidIpickupmycourage.
8.Hehasatnotimebeenbraverthaninthatcase.Atnotimehashebeenbraverthaninthatcase.
9.Sheissuchakindgirl
thatwealllikeher.
Suchakindgirlisshethatwealllikeher.
10.WecanmakeprogreinEnglishonlyinthisway.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeprogress.
四用強調(diào)(Itis/was。。。。that或do/does/did+動詞原形)
1.Irealizetheimportance
ofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.
Itwasn’tuntilIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceof…..
2.50%ofthestudentssurveyedchoosesuperstarastheiridols.(強調(diào)數(shù)字)Itis50%ofthestudentssurveyedthat/whochoose
superstarastheiridols.
3.Herbraveryandcalmnesavedher.
Itwasherbraveryandcalmnethatsavedher.
4.Ibelievehealthisbetterthanwealth.
Idobelievehealthisbetterthanwealth.
5.Hedidn’tfinishhisworkbecausehewas
careless.(強調(diào)原因)
Itwasbecausehewascarelethathedidn’tfinishhiswork.
五.用被動
1Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students.
Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students.
2.Weshouldpaymore
attentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.
Moreattentionshouldbepaidtoprotectingtheenvironment.
3.Thegovernmentshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoimproveit.
Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoimproveitbythegovernment.
高中英語句子完成提分的策略
高中英語句子完成提分的策略
一、時態(tài)和語態(tài)
1.主從句的時態(tài)要一致,高考中查考的有11種時態(tài)。
2.其中現(xiàn)在進行時,現(xiàn)在完成時,一般將來時,將來完成時,將來進行時,現(xiàn)在完成進行時的主被動語態(tài)。這些時態(tài)明顯的標識,①現(xiàn)在進行時:(中文提示中出現(xiàn))“總是,老是”時用句型sb.bealwaysdoing;②現(xiàn)在完成時:for+段時間,since+過去時間點等;③現(xiàn)在完成進行時:中文中有“一直”;④將來完成時:by+將來時間點;⑤一般將來時:over+將來時間段;⑥將來進行時:將來某個具體時間點,翻譯成:將正…,所以我們要尤其關(guān)注各時態(tài)的標志詞。
3.用主動表被動語態(tài)的詞或句型
4.進行時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)
5.使用被動語態(tài)的情況:①漢語提示中出現(xiàn)“據(jù)…,有人…”It’sreportedthat…,②無明顯的主語的句子;③漢語提示中有“被…,遭受…,應(yīng)…”或英語中有bysb.
二、情態(tài)動詞
1.?嫉臒狳c
1)情態(tài)動詞+havedone結(jié)構(gòu)表示對過去的虛擬
2)情態(tài)動詞+havedone結(jié)構(gòu)表示對過去情況的推測
3)can’t/canneverbetoo…:再…也不為過
2.其它一些情態(tài)動詞+havedone結(jié)構(gòu)
1)needn’thavedone:過去沒必要做卻做了
2)didn’tneedtodo:過去沒必要做,事實上也沒做
3)can’thavedone:過去不可能做
4)shouldhavedone:過去本該做卻未做
5)shouldn’thavedone:過去本不該做卻做了
6)musthavedone:過去一定做了(推測)
7)may/mighthavedone:過去很可能做了
8)couldhavedone:過去本來能做而沒做到(shouldhavedone表義務(wù),責(zé)任)
9)情態(tài)動詞+be+done(被動語態(tài))
三、虛擬語氣(相關(guān)句型)
1.Asif、wish、wouldrather后的虛擬語氣
2.表示“建議,命令,要求“等動詞后的虛擬語氣
3.Itistime+that從句句型中的虛擬語氣
基本句型
if引導(dǎo)的與現(xiàn)在,過去,將來事實想法的條件虛擬句(常會和倒裝一起考查)
特殊句型
1.wish的賓語從句
2.asif和ifonly(與wish相似)
3.without,butfor,otherwise
4.It+be+important,necessary,strange,natural,wise,unwise+that從句
5.It+be+time+that從句(動詞過去式/were/should+V原)
6.order,advise,suggest,demand,request+賓語從句
7.advice,idea,order,plan,suggestion,demand,command,proposal等名詞后的表語從句和同位語從句四、非謂語動詞(?嫉臒狳c)
1.過去分詞和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語或補足語(做狀語的是熱點中的熱點)
2.做賓語的非謂語動詞
3.動名詞做主語
4.不定式做復(fù)合謂語
5.with+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(todo/doing/done/介詞短語/副詞)
做此類題的訣竅:
1.定義:不可做謂語的動詞叫非謂語動詞
2.若一個句子含有謂語,且無連詞時,用非謂語動詞
3.①todo:表將來,目的,一次性動作
②V-ing表示正在進行,主動,習(xí)慣,經(jīng)常性動作
③V-ed表示已完成,被動,狀態(tài)(延續(xù)性動作)
五、名詞性從句
1.that引導(dǎo)的主語從句,賓語從句,同位語從句
2.what,whatever等符合連詞引導(dǎo)的主語從句
3.從句中語序(用陳述語序)
六、定語從句
1.由as,which(指代主句內(nèi)容)引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句
2.介詞+which/whom引導(dǎo)的定語從句
http://www.lady-power.com 引導(dǎo)的定語從句七、狀語從句
1.themoment,everytime,thefirsttime引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
2.狀語從句的省略,如Ifpossible,Iwillarriveontime.
3.狀語從句的倒裝,如Tryashemight/may,hehasfailedseveraltimes.
八、倒裝句
1.表否定意義的詞或短語置于句首
http://www.lady-power.com …that句型中so/such位于句首,主句主謂倒裝
3.only+狀語置于句首
http://www.lady-power.com 助動詞/情態(tài)動詞+主語
5.表地點的介詞短語位于句首
★在從句中用否定詞開頭的也要倒裝(考查的熱點)
九、It用法:
1.強調(diào)句型(熱點:時態(tài)和be動詞形式;強調(diào)句的一般疑問句式和特殊疑問句式)
2.it作形式主語:Itisnouse/good/worthwhiledoing;Ittakessb…todo;Itoccurredtosb.that…
3.it作形式賓語:make/find/think/consider/feelit+n./adj.+that從句/todo
4.固定句型:Itis(high/about)timethat從句/did/shoulddo;Itis/wasthefirsttimethat從句(have/haddone);Itwon’tbelongbefore…;Itis/hasbeen+時間+since從句;Itwas+點時間+when…等
十、特殊句式
1.倍數(shù)表示法
2.形容詞比較級:the+比較級+句子;the+比較級+句子;the+比較級+ofthetwo
3.of+great+名詞=同詞根的形容詞,如:ofgreatuse=useful